Wednesday, January 29, 2014

argument paragraph

Why year round schools are good.
1. because year round schools are good because you get the college that you want, if you get a good college you get a good job...
 Why year round schools are bad.
1. because of year round school you can barely get time for any sports that you want to play, because when its year round school its less time at home, if theirs less time at home you'll get to the sport that you want to play late if you get to the sport late you get less time to play ( if you want to play football and your late you get less playing time and if your really late you might do some sprites, push ups .etc), daring school 2. When its year round school you get less time at home, because of that theirs less time to do your homework and less time to play around. Because of year round schools theirs less time for a lot of things that you want to do. 3.The solution is to try to reconfigure the school calendar for the low-performing schools and hope that student achievement levels rise as a result, knowledge and academic skills will be critical to their future success and happiness for the student.


work cited:
Haynes, V. Dion. "Extending the School Calendar Is a Last Recourse for Low-Performing Schools." Year-Round Schools. Ed. Adriane Ruggiero. Detroit: Greenhaven Press, 2008. At Issue. Rpt. from "Chief Proposes Year-Round Classes to Aid Ailing Programs." Washington Post 4 Sept. 2006: B4. Opposing Viewpoints in Context. Web. 29 Jan. 2014.

Monday, January 13, 2014

argument paragraph


Why year round schools are good.
1. because year round schools are good because you get the college that you want, if you get a good college you get a good job...
 Why year round schools are bad.
1. because of year round school you can barely get time for any sports that you want to play, because when its year round school its less time at home, if theirs less time at home you'll get to the sport that you want to play late if you get to the sport late you get less time to play ( if you want to play football and your late you get less playing time and if your really late you might do some sprites, push ups .etc), daring school 2. When its year round school you get less time at home, because of that theirs less time to do your homework and less time to play around. Because of year round schools theirs less time for a lot of things that you want to do. 3.The solution is to try to reconfigure the school calendar for the low-performing schools and hope that student achievement levels rise as a result, knowledge and academic skills will be critical to their future success and happiness for the student.


work cited:
Haynes, V. Dion. "Extending the School Calendar Is a Last Recourse for Low-Performing Schools." Year-Round Schools. Ed. Adriane Ruggiero. Detroit: Greenhaven Press, 2008. At Issue. Rpt. from "Chief Proposes Year-Round Classes to Aid Ailing Programs." Washington Post 4 Sept. 2006: B4. Opposing Viewpoints in Context. Web. 29 Jan. 2014.

Friday, January 10, 2014

part 2:Touchdown patriots

Coach piked up the ball and set it down behind the 50 yard line, coach set it down right behind the a hash mark, on the field they huddle, I went to the left side of the field and  stud their waiting, I got ready for the play they where doing, someone on the other side of the ball said to a teammate "000". " no play" I said to myself, "WATCH THE BALL!!" I said to my group, ready ready ready, shift down ready set go, go, a player from my group stepped up a little past the line, the coach said "off-sides outlaws" coach pick the ball up and set it down behind the 40 yard line, both groups got lined up, the center said "ready ready ready shift down ready set go go go over ready set go, the groups blocked I waited till the last go, the runingback come runing past, while I looked in the back field bret was runing out of the side of the line like he thought he would get a touchdown, I ran at him and tackled him, I brought him down hard, he got three yards, they huddled, up my group got lined up and was trying to hear the play that the other group was doing, the other team got lined up when the coach stoped talking, I thought it is a run so i got ready for the play the group came up to do their play "ready, ready, ready, shift, down" i got in postion to tackle the runingback "set, go"