Wednesday, February 11, 2015

a literary essay based on the story wonder




A literary essay
Based on the story
Wonder by R.J. palacio

In this book people are always saying mean things about auggies face and he is the new kid in school because he was home schooled. this story is about wonder by RJ. Palacio. it doesn't madder how someone looks. in this book when its Auggies second and third day of school auggie already has a friend and a bully in a way. don't judge a boy by his face.

Throughout the story Auggie feels worst about school in till when he went to lunch, when he was at lunch he know that there were some people saying mean things and nobody sat next to him but this girl named summer didn't care of what Auggie looked like and went to go sit next to him. for example on page #51 '"is this seat taken'" i looked up and a girl was i never saw before was standing across from my table with a lunch tray full of food. she had long wavy brown hair, and wore a brown t-shirt with a purple peace sign on it. "oh , no'" i said  she put her lunch tray on the table, plopped her backpack on the floor, and sat down across from me. She started to eat the mac and cheese on her plate. "ugh'" She said after the swallowing the first bite. "I should have brought a sandwich like you did'"...  "yeah'" Auggie said, nodding.

This shows that Summer didn't care what Auggie looked like and wasn't judgmental like the kid named Julian and most of the people from their school. But Summer didn't care and sat across from Auggie and started talking to him and her friends called her over but she refused and asked them to sit over by her which meant a-lot and meant that she cares and she doesn't judges a book by its cover. Farther in the story Auggie gets more and more friends but Auggie is new to school because he was ok home schooled and didn't know how school would affect his life in till he knew that he was going to school.

Also in the story Auggie gets ear buds and think i will imbareced in but we doctor put The ear buds On he changed his mind when he put the ear buds on before the doctor turned them On. Auggie was waiting in till Halloween came Auggie wanted to be boba Fett and Summer Wanted To Be a Unicorn but not For the Halloween party at school.

For example at Lunch the next day, Summer asked me what i was  going to be for Halloween and Summer said she was going to be a unicorn on halloween but something else for the halloween party and Charlotte was going as Hermione. Auggie wanted Halloween every day so nobody would make fun of Auggies face.

this shows That Charlotte, Summer, and Jack doesn't even care about Auggies face and Julian, miles, and Henry are always making fun of Auggie and Jack. when Some of the girls at Auggies school have a party Julian was invited and made up a lie that Auggie punched him and Auggie has anger issues to the whole party which makes more people not like him. When it was school the next day Charlotte wanted to meet Auggie in a room so she can tell Auggie that Julian spreed a lie to everyone at the party and now everyone thinks you have anger issues and you punched Juilian in the face.

 At the end of the story Auggie goes to camp with his whole school and while they were at camp they were talking about something while that were watching a show, while Jack and Auggie were watching the show jack needed to use the bathroom and didn’t want to wait in the big line that there was at the bathroom so Jack chose to go in the woods and when they got out they found there self’s standing in front of 8th graders. When Jack and Auggie came out the woods the 8th graders pointed their flashlight right in Auggies and jacks face the 8th graders desisted to make fun of Auggies face Jack tried to “protect” Auggie. Miles and Henry found Auggie, Jack, and the 8th graders arguing and fighting Miles and Henry jumped in the fight trying to defend Auggie. Miles, Henry, Jack, and Auggie tried running away from the eighth graders so they can get back to the show and tell a teacher what happened in the woods.

For example at the end of the story more people got use to Auggies face and became more of a friend and when Auggie got an award everyone was clapping for him when he was walking up to the stage to collect his award everybody didn’t care what his face looked like. This shows that the students at beecher prep doesn’t judge a boy by his face or don’t judge a book by its cover. 


words: #849

Friday, January 9, 2015

Chunking

Crying his bob or all day/ Jacob Johnson/ got a horrible sunburn/ by afternoon because/ the cheap suntan lotion from his brother / became a thin liquid / and dripped into the sand.

All kinds of vegetables/ from celery to fresh tomatoes /were laughing or dancing or playing in the salad bowl / and the salad dressing / that had been as quiet / and unnoticed as the bowl itself suddenly / giggled with glee.

Dad was on the riding mower / in the afternoon / cutting the grass / bagging clipping mulching / them to cover his planting for protection

Tuesday, December 16, 2014

AHW: boy scouts

Saturday I got up out and jump out of my bed I noticed that I had the electricity merit badge we learn how to connect wires to make a light source after that we had weather same old boring stuff when the merit badge thing was done my dad told Toure' and me that their was a lock in "where?' "at a rock climbing place'" "cool..."/when we got their I was jumping up and down I was so excited  I went through the two doors to the front entrance I was ready to have a great time...

Friday, December 12, 2014

sixteen and young people were stricken with mysterious fever and none of the familiar remedies seemed to be of any benefit.
2a.

the next day after school Jess went down and got the number he needed carrying it a couple of boards at a time to the creek bank.
3b.


scrambled

but even as that thought touched his mind he know that for him to drift home that had bred him nor any hope and such and without any stake in the country only the shadow and none of the substance would be rootless.

scrambled words and sentences:

he know
but even as that thought touched
his mind
nor any hope of such that for him
that had bred him
only the shadow
to drift home
and none of the substance
rootless
and without any stake in the
country
would be

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Tackle football: the game: part 2

I went out to the football field it felt nice because their was a whole crowed  right behind me in the stands I came out of the small tunnel and ran across the field to my team it was like a 20 yard run to the other side. Coach sent the captions out to the middle of the football field to start of the game, the referee flipped a coin while the cougars said heads and when the coin dropped out to the coaches hands it said heads he flip it over on to the back of his other hand we picked receive, both teams went back to there sidelines, our captions came back saying "kick receive"  coach said "all kick receive" I would-of gone but I was out the first and second half 's of the game.
I toke off my helmet and put it on the bench and went over to watch the game start off with a kick. One of our teammates got the ball after it bounced and tried running, he ran past a few players on the other team he was about to get talked but he broke it and ran about 55 yards to the touchdown."wow" I said "that's just...sad"while shacking my head, The referee blow the whistle and waved his hands like he was trying to get some ones attention "flag on the play... patriots, no touchdown'" the announcer said "that's sad"(while shacking my head) "that's... that's just so sad" couch sent out blue O (offense) couch told jimmy 'to run play 36' jimmy ran back to the huddle and said "36 power 36 power ready'" "'Break'" and ran to the line blue 42, blue 42 set hit nick snapped it to Jimmy and Jimmy got the ball and ran a little bit then handed it off to Evan while he was running to the 6 hole, Evan ran straight up the 6 hole and then went toward the side line, he ran "wow" I said to my self, Evan ran up the side line and ran into the touchdown it is 6-zip  patriots "touchdown patriots" we lined up to get ready for the next play on the one-yard line "their going to get the extra point" I said to myself  "blue 62, blue... 62 set hit, hit, hike! snapped the ball to jimmy then ran to the right holding the ball out in front of him so Evan can get it Evan ran toward the 6 hole jimmy handed the ball off to Evan then Evan started off to the to make a touchdown then got tackled in the 6 hole we didn't get the extra point we got ready to kick it off for Rochester "ARE YOU READY'" jack screamed "READY...'" the hole kick off screamed after Jackson ran up to the ball to kick it the kick of team ran after him. Jackson kicked the ball and it flow through the air then hit the ground on the 30 yard line and bounced toward the side line Rochester cot the ball and ran for 10yards and 'Boom! he had gotten tackled I saw him on the ground I noticed he had hit the ground hard because I could hear the helmets go head and head.
Rochester's offense ran onto the field while the referee put the ball in between the hash marks in the middle of the field they lined up and got ready for there play our defense ran onto the field and they were starting to run there play. the referee blow the whistle they ran there play "hike'" the center throw the ball towards the QB the QB caught the ball and handed the ball to the running back...

Monday, December 1, 2014

AHW snowboarding

For a while now all then only thing on my mind after the past thanksgiving break is the cold snow blowing on my face as I rush down a hill on a snowboard. All the excitement and fun cheers me up and makes my day all the time. This Christmas I hope there is a lot of snow so if i get a new snowboard I bet I will have the best time ever. I got interested in it at 4 years old and still to this day I have never given up trying to get better. This year we are suppose to get a record breaking snow year which will be a great time to do what I've been doing since I have picked up a snowboard. So for this upcoming winter break you know where you can find me.

Friday, October 10, 2014

Tackle football: Macomb part 1

Friday: after school I went home and did my homework and checked the blog. My brother[Toure'] reminded me that there is practice and a tackle football game on Sunday so I went up stairs to my room and got my pads and put them in my shorts. I asked myself "I wonder if were going to win or lose this game"...
On Sunday: when it was Sunday my brother got out of his bed and said to me "get up" I mound, "its the game" he pulled my cover and bed sheet away, I got up "what time is my game" i said "10 something" my brother thought for a second  "what time is it now" I asked "7:38" "fine... fine"  I put my pads in my game shorts and got my shoulder pads and toke off my practice jursy off and put on my game jursy on I imaged how the game would go and how it would turn out to be like...  When I was going to the Macomb my dad said "you won't be playing for the first half because you weren't at practice" "I know" I said back I asked my brother Toure "what do you think your games going to turn out" he didn't answer...
 When we were there I put my cleats and said "dang there's wind" the wind felt like it was going to blow me right smack into the truck I kick my foot out to the right to stop that from happening I went over to my team coach said to go weigh in I went over and weighed in while my team was going under the bleachers...

Sunday, June 22, 2014

Summer

Summer here and ready to have fun but this change and I had to earn the right to play the games it want to play. I had to go to camp for the summer I and it turned out to be ok on the first day the 5th graders and I had to go to the youth room were there was a Ping pong table, a hockey table, a pole table and a nother thing I do not know the name of but I'm really good at. And it was so fun instill that last day like what the heck the camp only lasted for four days the but their was still more things going on their after the 6th day their was a lock in and when me and my brother and sister were their we played swat were you had to know a persons name and say their name before the person who is it hits you you probably get it. Then we played eagles nest and the games is kanda like capture the flag but the flag is eggs, it was flag football all over again, then we turn off all the lights in the church and play aliens and you would get perety scared when some one scared you you would be screaming like a girl and it was fun we even stayed up till 3:00 am playing games and watching movies, I had to drink 8 cups of mountion dew to stay up for the movie that we watched I had to sleep on a couch and it was so easy to sleep on those couches and in the morning we had cereal and donuts. I had so much fun at the camp and lock in.

Thursday, June 5, 2014

Literary essay

In seventh grade this guy named victor has a crush on Teresa.

Victor and Teresa go to French class together, so victor is always trying to sit next to Teresa so he can try to impress her. Victor wanted Teresa to be his girl that year, pg. 52, he tried talking to her but victor is to nervous to talk to her and victor has a friend named Michel who would always scowl at girls. victor is an nervous dude that really what's Teresa as his girls friend.

At the end of French class mr. Lucas was teaching his class what nouns are mr. Lucas asked victor "what is a noun" "Teresa" victor automatically said, pg. 55 When it was lunch victor would try looking for Teresa, pg. 56, he meet with Michelle in the hall on the way to class.

Victor and Michel were done scowling at girls, victor had to go too French he tried catching up to Teresa so could talk to her, when he got in the class, victor tried siting close to Teresa. Mr. Bueller
Asked the class if they knew any French victor raised his hand Mr. Bueller ask him a question in French victor had no clue what Mr. Bueller said victor tried speaking French to impress Teresa after class Teresa asked victor to help her in French.


Wednesday, May 28, 2014

My favorite post of 2013-2014

My first favorite post of the year is...
TOUCHDOWN patriots
This post is my favorite because it's about my tackle football league, MVP

My second favorite post of the year is...
Camping out: stupid shotgun!
Sounds weird but it's the story

My third favorite post of the year is...
Calvin and Hobbes
It's a really good book, and it's funny

My fourth favorite post of the year is...
Camping again
Their two different camp outs
And I'm make the next post about this other one don't know what the name can be now

We'll by this point my five favorite post of 2013-2014 is all the good times I had in school,

Good times!..      Good times!..

Monday, May 19, 2014

Part 2: camping again, stupid shotgun

✨🔥I woke up Mandela and Dann was talking about my football league because I was trying to bore them because I was not like outing description in it. I stayed in my sleeping bag trying to go back to sleep but Dann said that if I don't get I'll sit on you after he said that I got up so fast but he still sat on me 😑I did not like that at all. It was time to go solute too the flag and the Boy Scout flag "FALL IN" Dillon scram we all came over we were going to the shot out to shot the rifle's and shotguns then said "dismiss for breakfast" we cooked hotdogs, and Mac and cheese and made sandwich's when we were done we had to put on our B class shirts to go to the shot out "dismiss to cars" we all went to our cars and drove to the place I wondered where we were shooting the rifles and shotguns will look like 😃 when we got their I couldn't wait to go shot some thing he he i look at all the other shotguns and rifle and all the hand guns, when we put on the glasses and ear muffler-lures  our petrol leader separated us one group is going to the shotgun and the other goes to the rifles when we got to the rifles I went to the rifle that had a scup I tried all the rifle when we were done we went to the shot guns I hated I got in line to try it when I got up to the shot gun I didn't now what was about to happen, I had to shot a clay pigeon it was a circle well I'll take a picture of it in the next part 🔫 when I shot the clay pigeon with the shotgun the shot gun like gave me a punch like felling on my
 shoulder I did not like the feeling of the first shotgun but their was another one it had a longer neck, mussel, and stock point. I treys using the second shot gun it didn't have a lot of push "I think I nicked it" but I know I missed the clay pigeon,after that we had to go back to the camp sight and we cooked bacon and ate more of the chips that we had earlier when it got dark we sat next to the the dad's fire intill we had to go to bed will we were there we payed behind the dad's and other scout troops when we had to go to bed I told the scouts that I was sleeping with about my tackle football league till we all really felt like going to sleep (we'll in till I felt like it)this is what the clay pigeon looks like

Monday, April 28, 2014

Camping again

Thursday, April 24th
me and my trop (1699) was getting our stuff in the trailer for out camp out, at the barn where all our stuff was for the camping trip we were done when I got home I had to pack my stuff so I can go. I realized that my trop jacket. The next day (Friday, April 25th) school was over I was getting some things to keep me alive and having fun we went to the church where the boy scout storage is we all left the church for the camp-out  it was a really short trip there when we got there the hole scout trop was get their tents up and ready I am the quarter master so I have to help with all our stuff, some of my friends and me put up all the tents (mostly me😏) then we picked who's going to sleep with John our trop leader (for this year) and I'll tell you guys later why barley anyone whited to sleep with john well I'll tell you now, so when John is bored and you don't want him bored so when he's bored he'll tell you weird things like I brushed my teeth or something like that. So one of my friends was picked to sleep with him and I couldn't be me because I had to sleep with him last time our Boy Scout senior leader (Dillon) said "FALL IN" he told use what were going to do then he said "dismiss for breakfast" we got our grill and propane out we connected the propane to the grill we put the applewood bacon on Mitch was cook and I was assist cook Mandela dropped the turkey bacon we didn't care that's what we do when we got done with some of the bacon we gave them to everyone in our pack (flaming arrows) John got, and this is another thing about john he got one piece of bacon and yelled at us to hurry up and said that he's starving and one other kid and me didn't get one piece of bacon and we weren't starving he waited some more we were almost done Mandela put some more turkey bacon on me and Mitch cooked the bacon as fast as we could, we turned the heat up, the pan thingy cot on fire and went out and it keeper on doing it so I made the fire be putting the bacon were it would do that the pan thingy cot on fire and stayed like that the bacon was in the fire I gave that one to john 😀 the other one was mine. We played around when it got dark we got our head lights and flashlights and played some more... Saturday, April 26

Monday, April 21, 2014

Letter of complaint

4/21/14
Enri black

Birmingham, 14 mil rd, mi 1293

525 Covington rd, Bloomfield hills, mi

When I go out side for lunch recess and I didn't bring my jacket or coat and I need to back tin to get it the lunch ladies will not let anybody come back in and when we can't go out side or stay inside for the gym they won't let you go to your locker or you class room and theirs only one lunch lady that let's you sneak out we're like slaves on there.
My brother and his friends went outside and need to go back in because it was to cold for everyone that was out side and the lunch ladies stayed in and didn't a let anyone out, they were keeping us HOSTESSES, one kid got sick and they never let him in keeping him outside getting sick he had to go too the office after recess.
This effects other people because other people think Bcs is bad school because of the #### lunch ladies.
I think we should get better lunch ladies well lily's mom is the best lunch lady but the other lunch ladies should not be that stupid about the kids and how they act you kind of know what's going to happen if the kids don't get at least a little free time from class and that lunch. There was 16 other maybe more, complaints about the lunch ladies. This needs to change.

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

my stupid PS3

I played midnight club on my play station and I was driving around with my concept Camaro and the cops caught me speeding on the highway they tried to pull me over but then it turned into a pursuit I keep on crashing in to cars with my muscle car trying to lose them in my dust but they got really tight I drift and tried to go on the other side of the freeway and they cut me off so I couldn't  and the other made me crash it to the wall I hit him back to get away and by that time they got me...after that I lost my data on the game and I was forced to play another game aka (batman arkham city)

Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Calvin and Hobbes


Calvin: hold still; now boost;lift;c'mon! Hobbes: mph; get your hand out of my eye; Calvin: ok, forward! Hobbes: on the wat back, you're carrying me Calvin: hey I got some mail! its a valentine card. Hobbes: from susie derkins! Calvin: it says "please be my valentine." Hobbes: you're susies valentine! Calvin: i'm not her valentine just because I got this in the mail, am I? does the mail postmaster general know about this? Hobbes: calvin and susie siting in a tree-ee kay-eye-ess-ess eye-en-gee ! Calvin: I dont have to kiss her do I? is that what valentines do??! oh, GROSS! Hobbes: first comes lo-ove, then comes marriage, then come love, then comes a baby and a baby carrige! Calvin: this can't be happening! I need a lawyer! she can't make me be her valentine! Hobbes: here she comes! here comes susie! Susie: hi calvin. Calvin: get away from me! I'm not your valentine! Take your card back! Eww! Girls! Yecchh! Susie: that card wasn't for you, you moron. Didn't you read the back of the envelope? Calvin: the back? Calvin: "Calvin, please give this to Hobbes." HOBBES?!Hobbes: Me? really? Hot dog! Smooch city here I come!

Friday, February 14, 2014

calvin and hobbes

Calvin: hold still; now boost;lift;c'mon! Hobbes: mph; get your hand out of my eye; Calvin: ok, forward! Hobbes: on the wat back, you're carrying me Calvin: hey I got some mail! its a valentine card. Hobbes: from susie derkins! Calvin: it says "please be my valentine." Hobbes: you're susies valentine! Calvin: i'm not her valentine just because I got this in the mail, am I? does the mail postmaster general know about this? Hobbes: calvin and susie siting in a tree-ee kay-eye-ess-ess eye-en-gee ! Calvin: I dont have to kiss her do I? is that what valentines do??! oh, GROSS! Hobbes: first comes lo-ove, then comes marriage, then comes a baby and a baby carrige! Calvin: this can't be happening! I need a lawyer! she can't make me be her valentine! Hobbes: here she comes! here comes susie! Susie: hi calvin. Calvin: get away from me! I'm not your valentine! Take your card back! Eww! Girls! Yecchh! Susie: that card wasn't for you, you moron. Didn't you read the back of the envelope? Calvin: the back? Calvin: "Calvin, please give this to Hobbes." HOBBES?! Me? really? Hot dog! Smooch city here I come!

Valentine's day poem

                                                                                                February 14, 2014
Mom (Jocelyn),

You are patient
You are kind

You are patient

With Touré and with Gabby
When we bring worries to you
When we argue or fight
When You make brightness in the world
Now everyone is  joyful and happy

You are kind

When people are mean
Your peaceful heart loves use back
When ignorance comes
Deep breaths you offer and smile
You bring brightness to Touré, gabby, your number one child (me)
You will be my Valentine forever

Love is patient
Love is kind

You are Love, Mom (Jocelyn)

You are Love

Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Movies

I was at home building my rector set when I was bout to go to bed but my dad said "we can watch a movie" before we go to bed, then I put my rector set down and ran to my mom and dads's room to watch a good movie.

Monday, February 3, 2014

argument post-test: games

why games are a good thing:
when your playing a game you can probable learn from the game your playing like academic skill builders you play math game, on cool math games you can learn if you pick that math, aditon,multiplication,subtraction,or division, (etc.)on minecraft you can learn how to survive in nature, you know what to do and how to do it. you learn a lot of stuff from games and other games just are fun might teach a little bit, but you do have fun playing it. Why games is a bad thing:
when your play games that are just fun and no learning your just thinking about the game and nothing else so what you just learned in school you forgot about when your playing games like minecraft, academic skill builders ,cool math games, your helping your self learn inside or outside of the school.