Wednesday, February 11, 2015

a literary essay based on the story wonder




A literary essay
Based on the story
Wonder by R.J. palacio

In this book people are always saying mean things about auggies face and he is the new kid in school because he was home schooled. this story is about wonder by RJ. Palacio. it doesn't madder how someone looks. in this book when its Auggies second and third day of school auggie already has a friend and a bully in a way. don't judge a boy by his face.

Throughout the story Auggie feels worst about school in till when he went to lunch, when he was at lunch he know that there were some people saying mean things and nobody sat next to him but this girl named summer didn't care of what Auggie looked like and went to go sit next to him. for example on page #51 '"is this seat taken'" i looked up and a girl was i never saw before was standing across from my table with a lunch tray full of food. she had long wavy brown hair, and wore a brown t-shirt with a purple peace sign on it. "oh , no'" i said  she put her lunch tray on the table, plopped her backpack on the floor, and sat down across from me. She started to eat the mac and cheese on her plate. "ugh'" She said after the swallowing the first bite. "I should have brought a sandwich like you did'"...  "yeah'" Auggie said, nodding.

This shows that Summer didn't care what Auggie looked like and wasn't judgmental like the kid named Julian and most of the people from their school. But Summer didn't care and sat across from Auggie and started talking to him and her friends called her over but she refused and asked them to sit over by her which meant a-lot and meant that she cares and she doesn't judges a book by its cover. Farther in the story Auggie gets more and more friends but Auggie is new to school because he was ok home schooled and didn't know how school would affect his life in till he knew that he was going to school.

Also in the story Auggie gets ear buds and think i will imbareced in but we doctor put The ear buds On he changed his mind when he put the ear buds on before the doctor turned them On. Auggie was waiting in till Halloween came Auggie wanted to be boba Fett and Summer Wanted To Be a Unicorn but not For the Halloween party at school.

For example at Lunch the next day, Summer asked me what i was  going to be for Halloween and Summer said she was going to be a unicorn on halloween but something else for the halloween party and Charlotte was going as Hermione. Auggie wanted Halloween every day so nobody would make fun of Auggies face.

this shows That Charlotte, Summer, and Jack doesn't even care about Auggies face and Julian, miles, and Henry are always making fun of Auggie and Jack. when Some of the girls at Auggies school have a party Julian was invited and made up a lie that Auggie punched him and Auggie has anger issues to the whole party which makes more people not like him. When it was school the next day Charlotte wanted to meet Auggie in a room so she can tell Auggie that Julian spreed a lie to everyone at the party and now everyone thinks you have anger issues and you punched Juilian in the face.

 At the end of the story Auggie goes to camp with his whole school and while they were at camp they were talking about something while that were watching a show, while Jack and Auggie were watching the show jack needed to use the bathroom and didn’t want to wait in the big line that there was at the bathroom so Jack chose to go in the woods and when they got out they found there self’s standing in front of 8th graders. When Jack and Auggie came out the woods the 8th graders pointed their flashlight right in Auggies and jacks face the 8th graders desisted to make fun of Auggies face Jack tried to “protect” Auggie. Miles and Henry found Auggie, Jack, and the 8th graders arguing and fighting Miles and Henry jumped in the fight trying to defend Auggie. Miles, Henry, Jack, and Auggie tried running away from the eighth graders so they can get back to the show and tell a teacher what happened in the woods.

For example at the end of the story more people got use to Auggies face and became more of a friend and when Auggie got an award everyone was clapping for him when he was walking up to the stage to collect his award everybody didn’t care what his face looked like. This shows that the students at beecher prep doesn’t judge a boy by his face or don’t judge a book by its cover. 


words: #849

Friday, January 9, 2015

Chunking

Crying his bob or all day/ Jacob Johnson/ got a horrible sunburn/ by afternoon because/ the cheap suntan lotion from his brother / became a thin liquid / and dripped into the sand.

All kinds of vegetables/ from celery to fresh tomatoes /were laughing or dancing or playing in the salad bowl / and the salad dressing / that had been as quiet / and unnoticed as the bowl itself suddenly / giggled with glee.

Dad was on the riding mower / in the afternoon / cutting the grass / bagging clipping mulching / them to cover his planting for protection

Tuesday, December 16, 2014

AHW: boy scouts

Saturday I got up out and jump out of my bed I noticed that I had the electricity merit badge we learn how to connect wires to make a light source after that we had weather same old boring stuff when the merit badge thing was done my dad told Toure' and me that their was a lock in "where?' "at a rock climbing place'" "cool..."/when we got their I was jumping up and down I was so excited  I went through the two doors to the front entrance I was ready to have a great time...

Friday, December 12, 2014

sixteen and young people were stricken with mysterious fever and none of the familiar remedies seemed to be of any benefit.
2a.

the next day after school Jess went down and got the number he needed carrying it a couple of boards at a time to the creek bank.
3b.


scrambled

but even as that thought touched his mind he know that for him to drift home that had bred him nor any hope and such and without any stake in the country only the shadow and none of the substance would be rootless.

scrambled words and sentences:

he know
but even as that thought touched
his mind
nor any hope of such that for him
that had bred him
only the shadow
to drift home
and none of the substance
rootless
and without any stake in the
country
would be

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Tackle football: the game: part 2

I went out to the football field it felt nice because their was a whole crowed  right behind me in the stands I came out of the small tunnel and ran across the field to my team it was like a 20 yard run to the other side. Coach sent the captions out to the middle of the football field to start of the game, the referee flipped a coin while the cougars said heads and when the coin dropped out to the coaches hands it said heads he flip it over on to the back of his other hand we picked receive, both teams went back to there sidelines, our captions came back saying "kick receive"  coach said "all kick receive" I would-of gone but I was out the first and second half 's of the game.
I toke off my helmet and put it on the bench and went over to watch the game start off with a kick. One of our teammates got the ball after it bounced and tried running, he ran past a few players on the other team he was about to get talked but he broke it and ran about 55 yards to the touchdown."wow" I said "that's just...sad"while shacking my head, The referee blow the whistle and waved his hands like he was trying to get some ones attention "flag on the play... patriots, no touchdown'" the announcer said "that's sad"(while shacking my head) "that's... that's just so sad" couch sent out blue O (offense) couch told jimmy 'to run play 36' jimmy ran back to the huddle and said "36 power 36 power ready'" "'Break'" and ran to the line blue 42, blue 42 set hit nick snapped it to Jimmy and Jimmy got the ball and ran a little bit then handed it off to Evan while he was running to the 6 hole, Evan ran straight up the 6 hole and then went toward the side line, he ran "wow" I said to my self, Evan ran up the side line and ran into the touchdown it is 6-zip  patriots "touchdown patriots" we lined up to get ready for the next play on the one-yard line "their going to get the extra point" I said to myself  "blue 62, blue... 62 set hit, hit, hike! snapped the ball to jimmy then ran to the right holding the ball out in front of him so Evan can get it Evan ran toward the 6 hole jimmy handed the ball off to Evan then Evan started off to the to make a touchdown then got tackled in the 6 hole we didn't get the extra point we got ready to kick it off for Rochester "ARE YOU READY'" jack screamed "READY...'" the hole kick off screamed after Jackson ran up to the ball to kick it the kick of team ran after him. Jackson kicked the ball and it flow through the air then hit the ground on the 30 yard line and bounced toward the side line Rochester cot the ball and ran for 10yards and 'Boom! he had gotten tackled I saw him on the ground I noticed he had hit the ground hard because I could hear the helmets go head and head.
Rochester's offense ran onto the field while the referee put the ball in between the hash marks in the middle of the field they lined up and got ready for there play our defense ran onto the field and they were starting to run there play. the referee blow the whistle they ran there play "hike'" the center throw the ball towards the QB the QB caught the ball and handed the ball to the running back...

Monday, December 1, 2014

AHW snowboarding

For a while now all then only thing on my mind after the past thanksgiving break is the cold snow blowing on my face as I rush down a hill on a snowboard. All the excitement and fun cheers me up and makes my day all the time. This Christmas I hope there is a lot of snow so if i get a new snowboard I bet I will have the best time ever. I got interested in it at 4 years old and still to this day I have never given up trying to get better. This year we are suppose to get a record breaking snow year which will be a great time to do what I've been doing since I have picked up a snowboard. So for this upcoming winter break you know where you can find me.